Haiku # 353

year comes to an end

breathless, prostrate like a plough

stuck into the ground

Urban view
Urban view

 

# 353

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7 thoughts on “Haiku # 353

  1. melodylowes December 19, 2012 / 3:25 am

    Is there a ‘love’ button?? 🙂

    • The right mood December 20, 2012 / 10:43 pm

      I’m designing a brand new button for you! thanks Melody 🙂

    • The right mood December 20, 2012 / 10:45 pm

      Thanks so much for your comment. Glad you like it! 🙂

  2. glynfedwards December 19, 2012 / 8:21 pm

    wow, contemporary haiku…pretty unique. great poem.

    • The right mood December 20, 2012 / 10:42 pm

      Contemporary Haiku?? wow, I’ve never thought of them in these terms, it sounds good! thank you 🙂

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