Haiku # 199

your day languishes

in a dreary litany:

lazy cicadas

Playing with lines and colors

# 199

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6 thoughts on “Haiku # 199

  1. snowbirdpress July 18, 2012 / 12:15 am

    your haiku is so fitting for today….

    end of the day
    nothing but heat
    and cicada rain

    • The right mood July 20, 2012 / 10:03 am

      I love the “cicada rain”… Why didn’t it come to my mind before…. you! 🙂

      • snowbirdpress July 20, 2012 / 9:04 pm

        “cicada rain” is not really wet rain, but the sound of the cicadas resembles rain so much you think it’s raining! With the heat so hot you wonder it intesifies the illusion. It was 100 F. when I wrote this, but today it has dropped into the 60’s and we’re having a real rain!

        • The right mood July 22, 2012 / 11:01 pm

          Oh! I perfectly understand what kind of “rain” you are talking about.. and I like the idea of this sound that comes down.. like a shower 🙂

  2. Andi July 18, 2012 / 5:06 am

    An elegant composition, sophisticated & cool. My compliments…

    • The right mood July 20, 2012 / 10:03 am

      Thank you Andi, so glad you like it! 🙂

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